|Reviews for Another change of heart|
| Zeurpiet chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
This was very hopeful and uplifting, a nice change from your more depressing pieces (although I like them all). The last two lines confused me though, the angels being out of reach. Perhaps it means that the speaker is happy to be alive (heaven is still far away)?
| Julius Gillian chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
Soft as a dove and tranquil, I'm reluctant to find a peaceful poem after the rather negativ ones I am constantly finding. You have a gift for writing in a sweet and mellow grace, keep it up.
| diffident chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
I really like this. Or I would, but the overuse of commas put me off. There's already a line break; a comma is just too much. That and the capitalization of the first letter of the first word of every line. Unless it's important to the poem, I think it's kind of overkill too.
The language of the poem, never mind the formatting, was so softly poetic. "The world rustles under indigo spells" brings images of the twilight of dawn or dusk to my mind. Excellent poem.