Reviews for entropy
t-t-t-ouch chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
I love this.

the images.

The emotions.


smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 1/17/2008
aw, that's so sweet and heartfelt. i love that your poems seem so honest, and real.
multiples of six chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
Gorgeous, really gorgeous. I love the imagery & the metaphors, particularly the mud one.
kaylajac chapter 1 . 1/8/2008
often I feel like poetry meanders too much, but luckily this piece is a wonderful cure for it, because I love the way it sticks clearly to a theme but isn't redundant. great writing.
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 1/7/2008
First of all, love the author's note. I know this is probably a difficult situation, but still. Brilliant. The fourth stanza of this is perfection. I don't have enough words to say how much I enjoyed that. Bittersweet, angsty, lovely. Keep writing! :)
Aquafied chapter 1 . 1/7/2008
i like the second stanza the most, i would say. it is beautiful and yet very interesting.

overall this seems very rough, in a texture sort of way.

as if love was a tree with harsh, weathered bark.

does that even make sense?
gg. lass chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
this is amazing.

i love all the metaphors in it.

yours until the wind changes,