ooh cute story :)

i'll be reading updates!

update asap

i like it!

although... why does marcus say yo so much?

Bleh. This feels like a filler, sorta, and I'm not liking this cliffhanger. XD Don't leave us hanging! Continue! Quickly! XDD

asap

i liked this chapter.. even if it was short :-( update soon!

and i think this sentence is off:She now knew that the distance between the ground and her face were inversely proportional to how much damage she would sustain

it should be directly proportional, cuz the higher up she is the more damage she gets. you know?

it's been awhile ;-)

I'd like to see some extra information on these cryptographic methods (like websites or something) at the end of the chapters to help understand what she's talking about.

looking forward to more soon!

Oh, can't wait to see how it turns out :]

Okay I seriously wonder where they're taking her haha. Those two boys are really something aren't they. D

Aw I guess you weren't feeling generous. Pretty please put up the next chapter ASAP?

Keep up the good work!

gulistanlik

Hello again!

Ah, another extra homework assignment (albeit a fun one). Wouldn't it be terribly mean of him if the code wasn't a code at all but a random scribble? That would be mean. And it would be ironic if she actually found a message in it.

Lovely chapter. I'll be waiting for another! :]

Oh boy. I LOVE this story. Your characters a brilliant, real, and very amusing. The chapters are short but I like it because they don't seem short at all, they're engaging. _

This rocks my afce off

This is so short! And she hasn't deciphered the code yet! Please update soon.

I can't wait to find out where they are taking her! Great so far-I love the use of ciphers!

Well done, as always. I really hope you're in a generous mood, since we have been waiting awhile for this one! And you never finished deciphering the cipher, either. Wow, what a tongue-twister:)!