hey! you're back!

where did you get "reno cops rock his socks?" interesting title, caught my attention immediately.

hm... cross seems to be getting smarter with the notes. they seem to get harder & harder. maybe he's a code genius.

haha i had a feeling they would kidnap her. kind of like when you least expect it.

i have a feeling they're taking her to a party somewhere. even if it isn't a party, you can bet cross is there.

thanks for the reply, update soon!

Intriguing! I've been raeding Myrika's stuff for awhile, and figured it was high time to check out a few of your things. I like your style, and the characters are intriguing. I'm interested to see where this plot is going to go... My only suggestions are to 1) work on description a little-we still have no clue what Peyton looks like. and 2) dig a little deeper into your characters-you have the makings of an incredible supporting cast if you just push them to spill the beans a little.

Good work, I'll be waiting for updates!

-K.

love, love, love! all the codes such an interesting premise- and so much info. please don't leave us hanging (almost literally) for long!

what ... this is only a snapshot of a scene! Please feel *very* nice this evening! :P

This is cute, so far. I'm curious to see how it develops.

I did have a bit of a hard time keeping track of all the characters you've introduced (especially in the party scene, and all the names of former high school acquaintances), but I suppose the more important characters will have more development later on, and will be easier to remember.

I like the use of cyphers - I used to be really into code-making and a friend and I sent each other letters in code all the time. It's cool. I'm quite shocked that I never found your work before, actually; you probably hear this a lot, but you're a very talented author. Your style is very clean and readable - it's refreshing!

Oh wow. I'm positive Jordan's serious but let us see eh? I can't wait until the next chapter. I'm liking your stories. D

Keep up the good work!

gulistanlik

oh more confirmation of Cross' bad rep in high school. But he can be cool sometimes WITH the brains.

at first i didn't look at the author pen name and i thought, "myrika? lord-iron-balls? how big is this FP friend writing circle?" but then i realized that you, kendal, wrote this xD

awesome story so far!

This is GREAT... thanks:D

-whine- It's absolutely awful of you to not tell us what the note says! Cruel, unusual punishment and torture!

I love the dynamic between your characters. They're both such spitfires; I adore the two of them, and when I saw the update for this in my inbox, I absolutely knew it was beyond worth staying up a few minutes extra to read. I was not disappointed.

My bet would be the next cipher has something to do with either her hair or her eyes. Or both. Love the story by the way.

Interesting chapter. (: Not any questions (that I can think of), and I can't wait to see the new cipher. (: I kinda wanna see that sundress, actually, since Cross/Jordan seems to like it so much. XDD Looking forward to the next update! (:

Dude, I hate Statistics. Really. It's a pain in my ass. How you memorize all the calculator commands and what goes with what?