Reviews for Letters to You |
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![]() ![]() ![]() hey! you're back! where did you get "reno cops rock his socks?" interesting title, caught my attention immediately. hm... cross seems to be getting smarter with the notes. they seem to get harder & harder. maybe he's a code genius. haha i had a feeling they would kidnap her. kind of like when you least expect it. i have a feeling they're taking her to a party somewhere. even if it isn't a party, you can bet cross is there. thanks for the reply, update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Intriguing! I've been raeding Myrika's stuff for awhile, and figured it was high time to check out a few of your things. I like your style, and the characters are intriguing. I'm interested to see where this plot is going to go... My only suggestions are to 1) work on description a little-we still have no clue what Peyton looks like. and 2) dig a little deeper into your characters-you have the makings of an incredible supporting cast if you just push them to spill the beans a little. Good work, I'll be waiting for updates! -K. |
![]() ![]() love, love, love! all the codes such an interesting premise- and so much info. please don't leave us hanging (almost literally) for long! |
![]() ![]() ![]() what ... this is only a snapshot of a scene! Please feel *very* nice this evening! :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is cute, so far. I'm curious to see how it develops. I did have a bit of a hard time keeping track of all the characters you've introduced (especially in the party scene, and all the names of former high school acquaintances), but I suppose the more important characters will have more development later on, and will be easier to remember. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the use of cyphers - I used to be really into code-making and a friend and I sent each other letters in code all the time. It's cool. I'm quite shocked that I never found your work before, actually; you probably hear this a lot, but you're a very talented author. Your style is very clean and readable - it's refreshing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow. I'm positive Jordan's serious but let us see eh? I can't wait until the next chapter. I'm liking your stories. D Keep up the good work! gulistanlik |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh more confirmation of Cross' bad rep in high school. But he can be cool sometimes WITH the brains. |
![]() ![]() ![]() at first i didn't look at the author pen name and i thought, "myrika? lord-iron-balls? how big is this FP friend writing circle?" but then i realized that you, kendal, wrote this xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome story so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is GREAT... thanks:D |
![]() ![]() ![]() -whine- It's absolutely awful of you to not tell us what the note says! Cruel, unusual punishment and torture! I love the dynamic between your characters. They're both such spitfires; I adore the two of them, and when I saw the update for this in my inbox, I absolutely knew it was beyond worth staying up a few minutes extra to read. I was not disappointed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() My bet would be the next cipher has something to do with either her hair or her eyes. Or both. Love the story by the way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting chapter. (: Not any questions (that I can think of), and I can't wait to see the new cipher. (: I kinda wanna see that sundress, actually, since Cross/Jordan seems to like it so much. XDD Looking forward to the next update! (: |
![]() ![]() Dude, I hate Statistics. Really. It's a pain in my ass. How you memorize all the calculator commands and what goes with what? |