Teehee. You had me giggling at 'Peyton snorted. “She’s still got to put up with him.”'

Ok I cringed a little at how corny this sounded - 'She never would have imagined the laughter and tears '...

But it's a cute ending! Now get writing (or posting) on that Illusoire! (and I'm sad that you're giving up Des. It was very intense and dare I use the word 'titillating' hahahaha ... hope you go back to it some day!)

lol that was sappy

i do feel ill

but ah well,

well written and it was fun D

x

Maybe a little sappy, but I still loved it. You did a graceful transition to the epilogue, but I still would have liked to actually witness some of their actual relationship. It was probably very amusing! Thanks again, can't wait for your next story!

:(

That ending was so sudden.

13 chapters?

I REALLY liked this story, I was expecting so much more.

i enjoyed reading this fic so much and i know i'm going to enjoy reading it again and again

absolutely lovely

:]

wow. big time jump between those chapters

cute ending tho.

yes I liked it! I thought you were going to drag me through another cliffhanger, I'm not sure if I'm glad you haven't.

You rule. D

Yay! More cuteness ahead I hope. I'm glad they got together and there wasn't a lot of dancing around each other. Most stories finish with the couple just getting together, it would be so great to see them actually figuring out a relationship. Thanks for the great chapter!

What did the letter say?

Teehee, cute ending! I like it.

AHH! Such short chapter! But loved it!

Your Fan,

Operationiva

Was that really the end? I feel like I'm being tricked somehow...

OMG! THAT'S SO WAY CUTE! amazingly wicked awesome chapter! absolutely luved it! but what did Jordan mean by "second chance"? has he had a first one before? anywayz, PLZ UPDATE SOON! ]

is it going to be done soon? anyways cute chapter, update soon!