you meanie :

Short, simple, sweet and ingenious! {I do assume that's the end?}

Something wants more, but that a very cute end.

OMG! it's so short, but so cute. I can feel butterflies! :P

you moo cow! that was so short!

Nice chapter - short and sweet. I think it works as a conclusion, actually...there are still some loose ends, but it's just so neat this way that I think readers could fill in the holes by themselves.

Okay, this isn't over because it doesn't say complete at the top, right? So either epilogue is next up or some more chappies.

If you had already answered this question, sorry! I'm becoming forgetful.

gulistanlik

Thanks for the update, short though it was! Now what happens? :)

So short!

I expect more juicy details, lady!

:P Write more soon ~

i loved this! plesase can we have more! and now im off to check the rest of your stories ]

wonderful first chapter. gonna read more.ÜÜ

Ah! Cliff hanger!

Great story. I love your writing. I'm going to sleep now (yes, I'm in a different time zone than you).

Can't wait to read more!

OAWH! I love this! update soon!

I like these two. They're fun characters. Actually, I like your characters in general because they're all so normal and completely believable. And Jordan is a cutie. Gotta love how hard he works for this. ;]

KYA! That's seemed so romantic but I don't really get what's happening.. did I miss something? Peyton seems to have made a huge jump from where she was to the end of this chapter. S:

Love it, Cross is a crazy sexy name, and Cross is crazy sexy. Update soon! :)