Reviews for i made an angel, mommy
rust phoenix chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
Definitely disturbing, which means it's a strong piece to effectively evoke emotion. Very creative. The last three lines are so sad...
flies.like.decay chapter 1 . 1/9/2008
This is different, but well written _
Lady Riss chapter 1 . 1/7/2008
Good, mildly disturbing, but good. you are a great writer...
bad feeling about this chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
Scary, creepy, horrific...I love it.

I find that all of your work reminds me of books I've read.

Which is a good thing because I only read good books.
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
Great poem. It's very relateable. Nice work. Good luck with poetry and life. Have a lovely day.

Twilight Starr
NitroGlycerine chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
Disturbing, but I loved it! great job! now you just have to post your fic, and I'll be the happiest girl on earth! )