|Reviews for Plastic faces everywhere|
| dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
[Sprawled at my heart’s front door.] I like this line. The phrasing is interesting, and the rhythm works well with the previous line.
[(Too many) flashy smiles and pretend sympathy.] Hm, not my favorite ending. It seemed a little too wordy.
Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
| Zeurpiet chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
I know this feeling. You did a great job in capturing it :).
| Not Afraid of Bruises chapter 1 . 1/7/2008
good. my only suggestion is that you should try to express these ideas in a new and different way - keep the short length, it works well. But the best thing about writing is that you have a chance to say something in a way that no one has before... best of luck :)