Reviews for steel god
Basara chapter 1 . 1/8/2008
a path which without a 'gut' wouldn't survive the least...

ygg chapter 1 . 1/8/2008
Nontraditional to say the least. But it works! As an other reviewer mentioned, it's very audible, which is a rarely seen quality of good Haikus. The title fits perfectly. Great work!
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 1/7/2008
Excellent soundwork. Very audible.
tearing hands chapter 1 . 1/7/2008
The rhymes give the poem a really nice beat. I love the title. Good job!