| Reviews for steel god |
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   Basara chapter 1 . 1/8/2008 a path which without a 'gut' wouldn't survive the least... nice... |
| ygg chapter 1 . 1/8/2008 Nontraditional to say the least. But it works! As an other reviewer mentioned, it's very audible, which is a rarely seen quality of good Haikus. The title fits perfectly. Great work! |
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 1/7/2008 Excellent soundwork. Very audible. |
| tearing hands chapter 1 . 1/7/2008 The rhymes give the poem a really nice beat. I love the title. Good job! |