OMG! That's was hilarious. Loved it!

This is pretty amusing and really good. It left a smile on my face the entire time I was reading it even if it didn't really have a definite end for the both of them. It gave me the exact dose of romantic feels that I was looking for. Having read lots of romance novels for years, I thought I've already read all the good stuff/plots in the romance department and this proved me wrong.

A breath of fresh air. ahahaha.

Thank you and keep writing! \(_)/

p.s. edited version of previous review
This one's been corrected for errors having not read the first one before posting.

This is pretty amusing and really good. It left a smile on my face the entire time I was reading it although it didn't really have a definite end for the both of them aaand, it gave me the exact dose of romantic feels that I was looking for. Having read lots of romance novels for years, I thought I've already read all the good stuff/plots for that matter. And this kind of a breath of fresh air.

I love it this story alot...true boys should also have embarrassing movment ...this Guy is so cute..I wish I got chance to meet

I know by now you,ve probably been told this; but you should make sure you have several copies of stories or drafts. A few months ago my laptop crashed and I almost lost all my work. I now kept updated copies on a memory stick. :)

Haha, I loved this story :D Great job! :)

Hilarious! I feel sorry for him though!

Hilarious.

You truly do have an amazing talant.

Ha Ha Ha! Laughing out loud the whole way through! Good Job! I also liked your Morrissy story. It's not often you find an author so good at humor. Keep up the good work!

love the ending. ;)

Omg, I laughed the whole time I read this. It was great :)

He was so awkward it's hilarious. Poor guy.

I agree that embarrassing things always seem to happen to girls so reading this was a great change and highly amusing :)

XD HAHA.

that's hilarious! XD

i LOVE IT! :D :D :D :D

thanks for the oneshot! :D

I loved these characters! I would really enjoy a series or story about them...they seem like a great bunch. :)

I loved this! You are an amazing writer, my ninja friend. This was really funny and cute, and I loved how he had FOUR older sisters. I know I get bad enough, but FOUR girls...woah. :)

hehe. so cute.