|Reviews for Surprise Inside|
| The Reverse Edge Blade chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
I agree with your teacher!
Short, simple and to the point. Was there many people in you class who'd thought of the same setup?
Really cool! Haikus are great!
The Reverse Edge Blade
| Kusje chapter 1 . 1/7/2008
Its very clean and short to the point.
I think that its essence holds a lot of truth and meaning, maybe thats why your teacher was so impressed.
I like how you put 'self' at the top and added a period; really gives the reader a sort of cut-off feeling after reading that one word along with the period, which is good in this poems' case.
I like how you put 'you are what you do' because we are so used to seeing things like 'you are what you eat' and such. I like this spin better.
And adding 'distinct' at the end was brilliant. I definitely am favoriting this.
| Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 1/7/2008
I like the message it sends. Good job. Keep it Up!