Reviews for postmodern alchemy
BlackestOpal chapter 3 . 5/9/2008

This is very moving.

"the moon briefly hesitates

will she come ashore?"

I love those two lines, amazing.
Abulia Korbelitz chapter 2 . 4/14/2008
I like the second one. It's very expressive and interesting.
Basara chapter 2 . 2/19/2008
a pride resistant to change, when the past virtues are the key of change...

Eirien chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
So true, the real treasures are so often overlooked. Nice imagery to express this, I like the mixture of nature (oyster) and urbanity (bin), makes the poem in itself postmodern.
MallowsWins chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
This is a really striking haiku. The wasteful nature of the poem is really well done, the imagery was vivid and interesting.

Peace, Daze
Kaia Zeffirelli chapter 2 . 2/16/2008
Excellent! Love the line, "dappled with my pride". The title fits both haiku's (or haiku? lol) perfectly.

-Katrina Zeffirelli
Kaia Zeffirelli chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
As usual, awesome job! So much meaning is expressed. Keep it up!

-Katrina Zeffirelli
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 1/9/2008
Fantastic haiku. It's simple yet extremely powerful and very well expressed. Also very true. Amazing! Write on.

~Anna~ _
Basara chapter 1 . 1/8/2008
a language of alchemical philosphy which a normal person wouldn't notice abit... how humaity is becoming of "na(t)iv(e)ity" of the millenia...

laughter at the funeral chapter 1 . 1/8/2008
the title is so subtle


love the last line


truly yours
Centaurrius chapter 1 . 1/8/2008
Heart - that's what you have. Good job. :)