I really liked your story. I was just curious at first, and now I am glad I come upon it. For me, it was interesting to read. I do hope it will be continued.

Thank you for sharing.

The penguin thing is making me remember a thig in this odd diary of mine: beware his enigmatic smile, he can kill you in one of 417 different ways... :)

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Wow Izzy is a crazy nut who knew, that was really mean i dont like Izzy now i thought he was nicer than that. I feel sorry for Toby both his parents are leaving for christmas and it's totally normal for him the parents in this story have questionable parenting skills.

This is so funny emotionally Toby is the girl of the relationship but more dominant in bed its different i like it. You never expect the jock to want to discuss his feelings so i think its cute that Toby does and i wouldn't want Ian any other way.

you're not going to write a sex scene are u thats very mean but ill deal. Arnt they just the cuetest thing ever now all that has to happen is they get srung wich i guess is coming up. Hopefully it is Ians friends that find out first and i think Toby's parents will go nuts hahah.

AH there was no sexy fun im crushed. I know it will be sad but im kinda hoping Ian gets wasted and goes home with Isaiah just coz it will be interesting to see Toby's reaction. And then mabey there will be yummy make up sex hopefully :)

God i hope you continue this to the next cpht im going to cry if its one of those and the next morning they woke up things i hate those. How cute is Toby he want to run off and practically marry Ian its so funny and cute at the same time and wow what a bitch that Lisa chick is we havn't really meet her and i already dont like her.

It seemss like Toby really want to be with Ian and ist to shy about geetting cought wich is funny coz i so thought that it would be the other way around oh well i like it better this way. It would be so great if they go to prom and dance just like queer as folk. God i hope this has a sex scene coz its going to be hot.

Ok so that was hot really hot. Im glad that the kiss doest mean automatically dating like happens it other stories i have read Ian and Toby clarly have a while to go yet. A date yay that is going t be so cute but i wish the asholes would back of Ian already cant believe they wrecked all his pictures poor snowball.

So gorgeous "as long as I don’t quit the team and start dressing like you" favorite line plus the scene where Ian gets all flushed over Toby on the bleacher classic but still really cute. Wonder whats going to happen when they spend the night together hope is hot.

WOW it's actually kinda scary hw bad Ian gets beatin up why the hell havnt his parents noticed seroisly you would notice something like that right. Its cool how Ian can still laugh it off even when the assult is this bad but really he should go to the police with those inguries and get them all arrested and they can get sodomised in prison.

yay they layed off him not for long but oh well. I wondr how long Toby is going to be able to keep the respect of his fellow jocks if he keeps sticking up for Ian this may end up with them both being picked on :( I also like how you have really set them up as opposites, Ian loner, artistic, smart, goth, outsider and than Toby complete opposite who doesn't love an opposites attract story.

Love this chpt this is where i knew i would like this story. Toby's reaction to being called gay is fantastic makes you think that perhaps he has already thought about it before Ian so cute i love akward gay feelings. I didnt actually relise Ian was goth before this chpt mabey i missed it but it just makes it better coz i didnt real know how to pisture him, but i love how goths dress so im going to have fun imagining clothes.

Wow thats i fisrt dont think i have ever read a story where someone sso young has gotten an ulcer. I feel really sorry for him i hope the jocks lay off him when he comes back from surgery. Im glad you made Toby help him coz seriously if a kid in the bathroom is throwing up blood you are going to help them.