I think it''s sweet they are spending christmas break together.

But seriously, your story is GREY! There is no black or white! one minute you're rooting for Ian the next Tobias!? Sometimes Ian can be jerk, but it is understandable that he would be afraid of being in a relationship with his greatest tormentor. Then again, Toby pulled off a face heel turn and became a character who not only cares about Ian, but truly believes they have a shot in the real world together! This is one of the reasons why I love this story: Their relationship is struggling, it's almost real...

There is something seriously wrong with Izzy, really. Slapping Maggie across the face and shocing Ian down the bleachers!? Some friend. I'm sensing a future antagonist...

Wow, when i read this at the beginning, I thought it would be Ian wanting more affection, not the other way around. It kinda hurts to even read that Toby what's a more emotional relationship with Ian, a very essential part in every relationship that seems to be forgotten. Makes Toby look like the innocent sweet one in the realtionship. I can't believe I'm starting to feel for these characters. That is a tell-tale sign the author wrote a masterpeice.

PS I had a feeling Ian's favorite color is black :)

Aww cute. Their relationship is adorable! Their moods are always shifting. That's what i like about this story! One chapter life sucks for Ian, but Toby's presents just makes his life better! I LOVE IT! It's really heartwarming :')

Haha, Ian is a bit... dare I say, JEALOUS! Poor Ian, the sad and depressing life bus is coming around the corner... :(

These two really make a great couple! Opposites attract, right?

I like how these two do whatever it takes to keep their relationship a secret. From disguises to early morning runs! It's kinda cute. And Toby and Ian had yet another intimate moment... and then a fight. Jeez talk about overreacting, Toby can't really force Ian to got to homecoming, it is social suicide. Toby doesn't know the feeling, that's the sad part :(

Aww they had their first fight!

I have to say, the premise of this chapter was VERY interesting! A life in the day of Ian! Toby dressed up like Ian was pretty neat of a chapter. I'm starting to like the relatonship these two have!

Ouch, and the bullying continues! And they were getting really, um... intimate at his house.

Say, I forgot to write it down on the last review, but, what's the deal with Toby's parents? They seem VERY controlling! And also Ian's parents? They don't exist. Just saying.

This is actually one of the best original stories I've never read! It's depressing, but sweet all at the same time!

DAFUQ! Holy scmowzow! They kissed! I shouldn't be surprised but it was sooooo sudden! And a sleepover? yikes. haha things are looking up for Ian I suppose!

That's messed up! Who does that? It still happens today, I'm aware, but seriously? I wonder where all the adults are at this school? I wonder if they're blind...

Again, Poor Ian, his life is SERIOUSLY not getting any easier!

Haha, the idea that Ian, in all his darkness, is an expert at drawing vicious penguins that mutilate his tormenters, is hilarous! I don't know why, but if Toby is going to try and defend Ian, he could put a little more effort into it. Then again, he has a reputation...

Toby visiting Ian? That's a bit unusual...
The fact that no one has visited him in the hospital except the bully who had a hand in the accident is pretty ironic! The exchange of words they throw at each other was amusing and well-written! So far, i'm enjoying your story!

Aww now the bully cares? And a gastric ulcer? That must be A LOT of stress! Poor Ian. What Toby does to him is cruel and unusual, no wonder he carries that gun..

I found this on accident while I was looking for any drama/romance-type fics. Normally I would turn the other cheek if I saw Slash, but i decided, 'hey what the hell, 700 reviews doesn't mean it's all bad right?" I have no regrets!

The story is a captivating insight into a troubled teen. I feel sorry for him. The information on the fact he has a gun in his backpack was also very interesting. The ending wasn't any help either :(