|Reviews for Anonymous|
| kyo yuri enkatsu chapter 1 . 6/25/2008
Wow, I liked the rhyme scheme with this. It stayed true throughout. I can't do that when I actually write...that confuses me too much, lol. But wow! I like it.
Anyway, I think you've gotten over who this poem was about, right? I have problems with this person, now...lol. So feel better *hugs*
| SheridanSpence chapter 1 . 4/13/2008
I think many can easily identify with this poem. Nice job!
| fluffisacoolword chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
Definitely a familiar feeling, and a beautiful piece about it. I love the parts in parentheses, especially "I'm begging to be chosen" - it's lovely how you warp the words of the old saying and make it your own plea for his/her attention.
For formatting so it doesn't skip lines:
go to "edit/preview document"
copy/paste into word
ctrlF " / p p " (no spaces)
replace with " br " (no spaces, again"
copy/paste back into the document editor
and submit :)
| tangledwebweweave chapter 1 . 1/24/2008
Again, wonderful work.
I feel the same way about 'my guy'.
These lines just spoke to me, my favorite:
"to want someone so badly,
so much it hurts, and you don't know
if leaving them is for better or for worse."
Amazing talent you've gotten there. Love ya.
I just wanna add all of your poems, gosh!