Reviews for Anonymous
kyo yuri enkatsu chapter 1 . 6/25/2008
Wow, I liked the rhyme scheme with this. It stayed true throughout. I can't do that when I actually write...that confuses me too much, lol. But wow! I like it.

Anyway, I think you've gotten over who this poem was about, right? I have problems with this person, now...lol. So feel better *hugs*
SheridanSpence chapter 1 . 4/13/2008
I think many can easily identify with this poem. Nice job!
fluffisacoolword chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
Definitely a familiar feeling, and a beautiful piece about it. I love the parts in parentheses, especially "I'm begging to be chosen" - it's lovely how you warp the words of the old saying and make it your own plea for his/her attention.

For formatting so it doesn't skip lines:

go to "edit/preview document"

click "HTML"

copy/paste into word

ctrlF " / p p " (no spaces)

replace with " br " (no spaces, again"

copy/paste back into the document editor

and submit :)
tangledwebweweave chapter 1 . 1/24/2008
Again, wonderful work.

I feel the same way about 'my guy'.

These lines just spoke to me, my favorite:

"to want someone so badly,

so much it hurts, and you don't know

if leaving them is for better or for worse."

Amazing talent you've gotten there. Love ya.

I just wanna add all of your poems, gosh!