Reviews for Drawn Together
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 4/28/2008
Very good work here. Write on.

I Found Myself At 24 chapter 1 . 3/3/2008
Nice work on this, hun. I especially like the closing 4 lines.
Matthew James Current chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
Very interesting thoughts in this poem! The ending was especially insightful and left a lovely intellectual aftertaste in my mouth. My criticism in this poem is that I'd like to see you challenge yourself in regards to how you portray suffering and pain in your works. The tone I see in them is the tone you've used for a lone time. If you wanted, you could challenge yourself by trying to portray pain and sorrow in a new, unique way in your work. That would lend an extra element of spice to your style which is already becoming more personalized and unique.
Lurid Black chapter 1 . 1/9/2008
Sweet, it crosses from light to dark in a way.

Really like it, keep writing!