Reviews for The Guardian
SineMetu chapter 11 . 4/11/2009
Love it xD
kosmich chapter 10 . 3/9/2009
and we definitely need more Sym/Phoenix scenes. :D
kosmich chapter 11 . 3/9/2009
wow, this story is great.

the characters are soo vivid and interesting, i really like phoenix and sym and well, pretty much everyone. and of course the storyline and your writing style and... :D

actually i like almost everything about this story, so you just have to update it soon. ;)
Fantasy101 chapter 11 . 3/6/2009
I'm loving it! But what you really need is a Sym and Phoenix scene! heehee! Please update soon.
meep chapter 11 . 3/3/2009
only just noticed the update :)

Medrien is funny and I think a lot cleverer than he lets on

I want to know what's going on :)
MasacreInTheLivingroom chapter 11 . 2/25/2009
Pheonix is so adorable with his caring glare of doom xD and Medrien is the best thing EVER. o.o But that's beside the point, what's really important is Sym's kitten status. Now I think the real question here is when is Pheonix going to pet the kitty that is Sym? His hair sounds really soft so I don't understand how he can resist the urge, unless he's an alien that doesn't get such urges! O.o But that's impossi me so never mind xD. Anyway I hope you post again soon : p
JtheChosen1 chapter 11 . 2/24/2009
awesome work! Sym just can't seem to catch a break with Phoenix :P

keep up the great work, and I didn't catch any typos!
runaway sheet chapter 11 . 2/24/2009
WAAI! You finally Updated! I LOVE you! I'dd given up Hope (not really, I usd to check if this story was updated quite often), but now! Yes! more Phoenix and Sym AND Medrien! humuor. paint Phoenix pink!

Then when fp was bzy glitcing up, I was sad; AANND when it finally solves it problems, what should be on Story alert but The Guardian! by MacKitty (fo' real, wasso surprised, I had to check if it was actually your story).

Yo, so okay, here's a Q. If his mommy left when he was in diapers with daddy out of work, how do they still have an apartment? That mommy being a Guardian wsa a shocker though. No wonder his dad was in denial when Phoenix told him about Sym.

I LOVE MEDRIEN! His crazy antics borne out of love amaze me. Iwant to know if Hayden and Sym are like relatedin any way .

Sleepover! I wanna join. Please keep updating this story *begs* I'l even learn how to lift up an eyebrow like Phoenix and apprentice Sym. Please?

Update! I loved that Kitten comment btw. umm...update!
MasacreInTheLivingroom chapter 10 . 2/13/2009
You know I'm with Sym I wanna know whats going on too xP you did a really good job with this story, but I'm going to have to it this short for now(I'm on my IPOD) I hope you post again soon : p
meep chapter 10 . 1/28/2009
i'm all curious to what's going on.

Please say you're still gonna update this?
insomkneeack chapter 10 . 12/4/2008
Hey, hey, hey, when are you going to continue, I'm into it now. I like it a lot, so please continue! Please?

NakedKing chapter 10 . 11/19/2008
o i really like ur story plz right more!
Duuude chapter 10 . 11/6/2008

You are so freakin' hilarious. OMGSH. A re-match with that one tree that tripped... God, that made me laugh soo hard.

Haha. He got beat up by an elbow. Wow, you're pretty funny, I like stories that make me smile.

Oh yeah and in my other review I said I would go reach Chapter 9, I meant Chapter 10, the review was FOR Ch. 9. XD

Good, veery good.

Don't worry, take your time on the updates. The longer you take, the better the quality right?

I don't want to sound demanding, since you are righting this for us. )

I don't really see any problems at all but I just can't wait to see what's going on with Hayden, did he know he was doing that stuff? He doesn't seem like the evil type...

And why did they all leave him?

AH! Please update soon, I'm kinda impatient as you can see.

Even though you are absolutely hilarious, you should bring on some emo parts, ya know? Like with Sym's dad and all or something about Phoenix... why he's soo... himself. Haha!

We. And now I remember that you Medrien was sad in one of the chapters or something... TELL us whyy?
Duuude chapter 9 . 11/6/2008

That is so enough action. Where have I been? I forgot all about you and your hilarious story!


They're soo funny. God. That had to be in capitals. I love you too since you created them.

Ah. I checked out your profile and says you'll update soon, YOU BETTER. Cause I'm going to be following you after I read Chapter 9! )


Psh that was NOT a threat. XD
JtheChosen1 chapter 10 . 10/23/2008
this is an awesome story! really really good! anyways, i hope u write more soon b/c it totally kicks ass! my only compliant is that Sym seems far too complacent with how his life is pretty much not his own anymore, and that even tho he's the Guardian of the SPirit World, he's being treated like crap from his supposed friends and allies. Just a thot, since he is a teen and shouldn't be dealing with this kind of stress. maybe a full blown angst/emo moment that would make ppl back up and say 'whoa whoa who. we gotta stop treating him like this and actually help him, cuz he's wondering around with no clue on what to do and we're just pushing the blame onto him.'

lol, other than that, excellent work!
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