Reviews for The Guardian |
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![]() ![]() ![]() oh, i like this story. :D it has its funny moments and then it turns all serious. the funny moments though make me laugh to so hard. oh, update soon! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() ZOMG, a fire! O.O nice ending. I sincerely hope you update soon! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story and all the characters in it. Though I'm a little curious why they left their bikes at the ihop breakfast place. x) |
![]() ![]() ![]() The gray guy's cool! Haha. He can blend in with his backgrounds... xD Medrien's the tiger... Phoenix is the panther... Palla's the fox? Did you mention this? I can't even remember ... Heheh. At least you updated.. at least. Nothing really happened though.. -_- XD I want some action! Very impatient person here... Argh. Oh no. . . Hayden knows! 0_0 Cliffhanger of doom! Can't wait for the next chapter! ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, Sym is so funny...and this new Hayden guy, I want to know more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! I Cant Believe You Left It There! . Whore! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohmygosh. If I had any make-up at all. I would do that to people too! haha. so much fun! wee. I love this story. Awesome idea. Spirit World, Council, Guardiann. It's all very Star Wars-y. New word. XD At first I wanted a relationship between Sym and Phoenix but now I LOVE Medrien, he's so cute. I want it btwn Medrien and Sym! Sym's a great character btw. Great. Especially when he's like "I almost died today," out of nowhere. XD Please update soon. This update took forever. Even though I'm reading it WAY late. I wanted to save it up or something... Hehehe. Anyway, please update the next one soon. I really like your story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I Love This Story Its Funny And Serious At The Same Time! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really cute story though I'm not sure I like Pheonix all that much. Sym really does have his hands full and it will be intersting to see how this plays out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh. Interesting. I really like this. and hope ypu update soon. no pressure. really. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story is so cute, seriously. thanks for the update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like all the characters, but I think there's a bit too much focus on them. If you lengthened each chapter witha bit more plot and/or worldbuilding, it would improve the balance. (My advice, you don't have to take it.) Medrein's cute. He reminds me of my friends. Livi |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw, Medrien is just so adorable...and really I'm just so in love with all your characters. and you updated. yay! here's some cyber brownies *restrains from shoving in face* and yeah...I haven't updated in like forever, I'm hoping to get some writing done this weekend though, so be on the lookout... |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMGSH! This is really good! I like. And the confusingnss is awesome! We can't even tell who the slash's between. Though I'm betting on Phoenix and Sym. Anyway this is great! Please continue... and I really hope your 'sucking at updating' thing goes away. Like now. Haha. Cause I love it. Nice ideas ... the overall magicalness rocks for sure. And I love Medrien's attitude, I've always liked those types of characters. And Sym's whining is cool too. Phoenix already sounds really cool in my head. XD Continue writing! ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() heya! it's your (wannabe) (soon-to-be) (ugh, whatever) BETA! *jumps around like an idiot* This is going to be short because i NEED to go read what comes next but oh my god this is BRILLIANT and i'm already completely in LOVE with phoenix! And Sym! We Sym! *huggles you characters* |