Reviews for pathways to everywhere
wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
Wow, such an original idea, connecting graves to flowers and pointing out the central message in the final line. I admire the way you manipulate syllables so easily to make the numbers right!
Dormio chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
Wow very beautiful :]
Kicking Poe chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
simple, gentle, and beautiful. one of the loveliest haiku I've ever read. cheers.
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
so much said in very little words

good job
Lurid Black chapter 1 . 1/10/2008
Wow, thats really good, sweet haiku, really well written.

Keep writing!

Lurid
Kerokim chapter 1 . 1/10/2008
nice! i like it _