Reviews for Trace
Zeurpiet chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
This has so many different meanings and interpretations to it. In my mind, this makes me think of the speaker being betrayed/hurt by someone close and dear to them, but my interpretation is probably a lot different from yours. Great job in making something so meaningful with so few words.
tangerine dreamer chapter 1 . 1/10/2008
this is beautifully simplistic. and it works. very nicely done!
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 1/10/2008
Simple poem but effective. Great. Write on!