Reviews for Substantial Amounts of Negative Space
Tipped chapter 2 . 3/1/2008
O.O God in My Pocket is absolutely amazing...
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 2/5/2008
I don't know why, but that totally made me laugh. Oh man. Dennis Kucinich. He's so irrelevant, even if he does keep trying to run for president. That's great. Keep writing! :)
Let It Rain chapter 6 . 2/2/2008
They read like songs. And they just seem... unspeakably pretty. My favorite is "God In My Pocket."
sunday night sky chapter 3 . 1/21/2008
I like the cavern tavern best... it flows really well and is full of emotion and honesty...

for some reason my reviews sound like a 2 year old has written them today... but all i mean to say is that i like this piece :)
sunday night sky chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
I don't know who this Dennis Kucinich is...

oh wait, I have googled him now. I feel embarrassed for my lack of US knowledge.

I will read on to the next haiku now.

But I did enjoy this one :)
vaudeville summers chapter 1 . 1/10/2008
ahaha great xD

DeeAnna
Lurid Black chapter 1 . 1/10/2008
Hehe it fit in well - like someone was speaking it, rather than trying to convert it into haiku.

Keep writing!

Lurid