|Reviews for Four Sisters|
| SEMMU chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
Great job with nature. Go nature! I've never read/heard all four elements described as feminine. It gives them a nurturing quality. I particularly enjoyed
"These sister elements
To peacefully stir
Your life and mine."
Nature is my therapist. I can relate. Write on!
| Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 1/10/2008
The poem flowed well. Good job describing the elements. Nice work.