Reviews for Four Sisters
SEMMU chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
Great job with nature. Go nature! I've never read/heard all four elements described as feminine. It gives them a nurturing quality. I particularly enjoyed

"These sister elements

Slowly intertwine

To peacefully stir

Your life and mine."

Nature is my therapist. I can relate. Write on!
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 1/10/2008
The poem flowed well. Good job describing the elements. Nice work.

Twilight Starr