Reviews for Tension
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
I love the way you describe the anger and the ending is awesome... great piece...
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
Maybe if I knew the story behind this, i would understand this more. BUt nice job. Keep it up

Kristie Marie
sweets555 chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
Everyone fights. It's a natural part of life, sadly enough.

Great job, as always. I enjoy watching your writing progress. It's fun.
Randall Flagg chapter 1 . 1/10/2008
Danielle. I didnt mean to hurt you. I didnt mean a lot of what I said, and I DO care about you. I should have stayed this morning.

I did take it the wrong way, and I was worried, but I'll live.

Now I KNOW you can fix the situation between your friends. Just...well. Spend more time with them. I know you love me, and I know you love spending time with me, but Pockets, and Casi need attention too. Just next time at lunch, you want to hang out with Casi the whole time, I would like to know, so I can go find my friends. Id gladly sit there and watch you read, but when you leave for most of lunch, come back and ignore me (not in a mean way. you were busy...i get that), It would have been a bit nice to KNOW. But either way. This fight was coming. It wasn't long...but it was horrible.

I love you. Ill see you tomorrow morning and give you the biggest hug you have ever gotten. Hell, I'm even going to get to follow you to class. You can say hell on FP right? Wait...youve said MUCH worse. lol. nvm.

Ill love you forever, Princess. And if you really mean it when you say forever back, were going to have to make it through a few fights.

Goodnight.