Reviews for Blind Grace
little-chibi-girl chapter 1 . 2/29/2008
I really like the imagery in this. just lovely!
Leaves of Labefaction chapter 1 . 1/23/2008
Good poem! Why were in the hospital? poor you... I hate hafting to go to the hospital.

Anyway, back to subject. (I say that a lot in reviews...) I especially like the inhale/exhale part. The soldiers/tombs thing is a bit overused, but I think it is fine in this poem.
ladyplatypi chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
A lovely poem: I really like "fleeting feelings" and "breathe in, gentle lungs, fill to the brim with life". Great work!
Ghost Planet chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
Fantastic! I really like it. I wish I could write that well.

I loved it! Keep writing.