|Reviews for lost|
| Patricia Louise chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
These remind me of a song by Pat Benatar. Anyhow, these are great. I love haikus. I need to write one or two myself. I used to hate them. I just need some practice. The words chosen are great, and I love the fire imagery.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
I like them.. they could stand alone but they also fit wonderfully together... the only thing i didnt like was how you used rage twice in the middle haiku.. other than that it was awesome
| NeedsDeletedUgh chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
Thats very pretty, and very sad.
You should post things more often though.
Its like you've fallen off the face of the earth
| ADSpencer chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
Nice series of poems! Great job. The last one really wraps them together. Great to see some more stuff from you.
| smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
i dont usually like haiku writing but i think if you combine three or more like you did, i think it works out nicely and it seems more complete. good work. i liked this. keep writing. )