Reviews for The Struggle of Song
Dani P chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
i liked the begining of the poem, it was simple, yet conveyed the message clearly. however the last 2 or 3 lines seemed kind of like a lame ending to the poem. to me, when i finally reached the end it was like...thats it? the poem led up to such a great ending but it ended in disappointment

in short, i would rework the ending and then ull have a lovely poem.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
I lie this the whole song idea is beautiful.. Im not a big fan of sonnets usually because they seem stuffy... this piece isn't like that... its beautiful, but not hard to read
lauren chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
What does "marinade" mean? D:

Feel better by tomorrow night, because there's no way I'm staying up to do my homework alone!

Also, this is cute. :3