|Reviews for stages of school|
| Lilyre and Livvyg chapter 5 . 5/3/2008
hehe... so true so true! i am in a stance of hating school right now because of a teacher and a guy... but you know live and let live
| oxytocin chapter 5 . 3/7/2008
I like your writing - it does what it says on the tin. This is good. However, I don't feel like there is anything particularly profound or symbolic in there - it may just be this collection, that you want to keep them as realistic and straightforward as possible. The double spacing is annoying. But that's just me being fussy, so don't stress about that.
You have a very cynical view of school. I agree about the work. Far, far too much.
Good job! I'll read more...
| Walrus Lover 2.0 chapter 3 . 3/4/2008
I think school is overrated. Cha.
| Lilyre and Livvyg chapter 2 . 1/18/2008
rather good... describes the moringing routine perfectly... about the bus i would never know, never riden one for school, except band and feild trips...
| Lurid Black chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
Sweet, well written, great poem, really discriptive, keep writing!