|Reviews for My words|
| Zeurpiet chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
This makes me think of highlighter yellow and navy blue. I'm not sure why I just wrote that or even felt the need to, but sometimes things just give off such strong colors that I feel like sharing (I'm an artist at heart I guess).
Anyway, this is a wonderful poem. I love how you bolded 'me' in 'themselves', it makes the piece that much more meaningful. It's rare that I don't like one stanza more than another in a poem, but in this one, both are equally good. Great job!
| Lurid Black chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
You've put 'me' in failed theMsElves, all that came to my mind was failed yourself, lol I really don't know, I'm just not good as a poet, keep writing!