I really like where you are headed with this story. It reminds me just a very little of 'Two Weeks Notice'. I do hope you allow Andrea to get a life independent of the Beast ;) before they fall for each other. Also, this chapter provides a little more insight into his feelings as well. I would love to see you develop the characters.

THAT WAS SO SWEET! And the doctors sure know something don't they? *wink, wink smile* *Runs off before Andrea flashes her deadly glare*

I quite love this story, and really do hope you continue on with it. I love how their relationship is developing "naturally" even though she's the one he's be looking for the whole time and he doesn't even know it.

Oi, she's bound to end up at the restaurant soon. The Beast would have known that Andrea manages the restaurant before, right? Application process and all, however, he's most likely oblivious about her relationship with Jared. Perhaps they'll have dinner there when Andrea's well.

ah jared should show up to cause some trouble :D

Your story is absolutely amazing. I've read it about 4 times today! It's one of those stories that absolutely draw you in and I can't help but smile when Andrea gets all giddy over the beast!

I'd like to see more of Jared though - he's obviously busy with his new San Francisco branch, but is Andrea's revenge plan going to work? I can imagine the beast helping Andrea make Jared feel super jealous, especially since he's aware of how amazingly hot he is.

Also, I wonder if Andrea has come up with her bestseller yet. Maybe she'll write her own Cinderella story as the bestseller and that's how the beast ever finds it was her.

I like that the beast has a soft side to him - but it's agonising not knowing if he likes her that way or not!

Please update soon soon soon soon! Pretty pretty please!

Thank you for updating during your busy schedule. I love this story, it draws the reader right into their world. Keep up the good work.

Thanks for updating! So many FP stories are dead now that I almost gave up on this one. I'm glad it wasnt though.

This chapter makes for really nice development between them, I can't wait to see what's next. Is he starting to feel stuff for her or is it just a general friend-boss sort of caring?

i love this story

it is a wonderful twist on a classic

aww, he's sweet. would have liked to have had more of a reaction to his inability to find Cinderella though - anything from his POV?

update soon

so so so good :)

i gotta tell you.. I'm in LOVE with this story! And aw, poor Andrea but yay for thoughtful Beast.

update asap :)

thoughtful of her beast.:)

forgot why andrea is living with the beast.

update soon..gotta reread to remind myself...

I like this chapter, even though you had to sacrifice your protagonist's health to write it. Poor Andrea. I'd love to see some more! (I feel like Oliver Twist here, haha.)

Hi! I swear I've been reading this for awhile, but I haven't gotten into the habit of commenting til recently.

I LOVE THIS. Had me cackling and dreaming about The Beast the whole time. I hope you update uh, soon. I almost forgot what happened (but totally didn't mind re-reading. Much fun when reading this story)

Wait a mo, so she didn't get to buy what she initially set out for? :O