I have to admit that I found Karia to be pretty annoying in the beginning but I grew to love her. Jason is my favorite character for sure though.

This is one of the best stories I've read on FP. Seriously. I love how the character's intertwine and you're not just focusing on one conflict, one character. It reminds me of the movies Elephant and 2:37, both which use the same method of story telling as you do. This story needs more recognition!

"She smiled at me and I returned it with a sneer. A look of shock washed over her face and she looked back to the round."

Should be ground. Favorite story, author and story alert.

aw. i like it. jason's always been my favorite, whatever i may or may not have said otherwise. they're so cute.

so sad it's over, but it was a lovely ending.

rock on!

aw. i bet he's cute. i hope she asks him out and all. i bet he'd say yes.

or maybe not. but if it was a trashy romance novel, he SO would. hee. so cute.

post more soon!

aw, he's cute!

yeah... guys like that, all hopeless and stuff, it's precious. i loveit!

post more soon! (you know what i just noticed? the initials of "post more soon" are pms... just pointing that out... i'm a little sugar-high, so i think it's funny... hm... maybe it actually is...)

aw... poor brendan and charlie... well, i hope everything works out for them, and his mom's okay with it and such.

post more soon? :D

aw. poor brendan.

TELL CHARLIE NOT TO END IT, DAMMIT!

but yeah. now or never is right.

post more asap!

Hi! First of all, it's a really good story so far. You write well.

And secondly, I just found a small typo if you want to fix it. You said "If her told her how I felt, she and I could be in a relationship, man." Wouldn't it be "If I...?" Just an observation. D.

Keep writing, can't wait to read more. ).

- Ess.

oh, jeez. pregnancy, that's... well, obviously she has to tell him... well, no, she doesn't, but she really should...

i like him, though.

Wait I'm kinda starting to get confused. Are you going to be continuing the stories? Or does it end at now or never?

Other than my confused brain...

I really like these stories! Update soon!

aw, jeez.

i really hope he chickened out on that one :

abby seems cool, though. maybe she wouldn't care. i probably wouldn't, unless there was like, a ton of people there. and there isn't. so, y'know...

but yeah.

good chapter, post more soon!

that's sad.

i hope she apologized.

very sweet, though, in a way.

post more soon!

o.0

again, awesome.

I like that it's in a different person's perspective each time.

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i definitely liked this chapter.

it's cool, these are based on true stories. i'm not sure if i mentioned it, but nothing in my life is cool enough to write a story of.

anyways, this was good. please update as soon as you can!