|Reviews for Water is Rising|
| Discipulus chapter 1 . 1/29/2008
Another great poem Lady Glass! I guess the only problem is the lack of obvious rhythm. I say obvious because I very well could be missing the talent I know is in there. ;) Great job though my Lady. :)
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/18/2008
It seems odd to me that you expect them to notice but you know they wont see it because they're blind... but other than that I like this piece a lot.. the black and white photo part with the red lips and blue eyes was a great image as was all teh descriptions of the water... I also like how the different stanzas relate to each other
| Britani- Friend of the Bears chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
I like this one.
kinda choppy though.
Im pretty sure that you meant for it to be that way.
| Solstice Of Light chapter 1 . 1/13/2008
Reminds me of a fractal. Peice by peice it makes no sense, but when you take the whole of it, you get a nice picture.
| Michelladora Moon chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
Great job, I like this one a lot :)
| LoveisAllthereIs chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
this was really bittersweet, i like it.
good job. :]