Hahaha I love the ending

NO NO NO NO put one more chapter pls ps pls pls?

Oh and it's spelt as tank top not tang top.

Aw.

Nooooo i dont like carter. Horible ending. Great story. :)

They talk about her broken heart in third person

Why does everyone love the name lucas i hate that name reminds me of mucus

I love how you finished the story!

AWWWHH! I loved this story, especially the end. It was cute. I like how a few chapters back, youu had Carter have drinking problems and such. Great plot. Keep writing!

nj. yeah!

Just finished re-reading this story and it still gets me...

Was interested in this, until the pregnant part. It's not you, it's just I'm not usually a fan of that type of thing in stories like this.

your sentences and sequence of what happens in the story doesnt really seem like it "flows". there isnt really any transition to your events, and your dialogue sounds like a bunch of beginner actors repeating whats on their script but not actually adding any emotion to it. idk, it might just be me, but your story is like a little bug just buzzing around my head and i cant seem to get rid of it. sorry.

This is giving me a Mary-Sue vibe. I think I'm gonna stop reading now...

Your story is so sweet and cute. I am so sorry for Jimmy. I glad that Carter finally woke up and start to change his life for Gracie. How cute that Gracie and Carter have 3 wonderful children. I wonder if they are plan to buy a puppy or kitten for them? :) Wow how cute twins that Aiden and Michelle have. I am look forward to your next story. I hope its Gavin's story or one of Gracie's children - Mia's story. Can't wait for it. Keep writing. :D

hahaah. Do I hear a sequel? lol. I kind of thought that you should have gotten her madder at Carter. I wanted him to beg her to gave him her forgivness. Anyways, good story!