Reviews for One Track Mind
empathic life chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
Funny and quirky and rather sardonic. You sound so bitter about all our country's issues... It's amusing. Anyway. I like the speech-y feel to the thing, and the way you presented issues in both an amusing and serious way... If that makes sense. Yes. Yours, e.l.
Holly Rose E chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
So... one of my biggest pleasure is reading a very satirical, almost biting, take on politics. And -blisfully, sweetly - i chuckled all the way through.

"i do NOT start affairs with prostitues in bathrooms".

In short, a favorite.

I particularly like your line breaks, it rolls off my tongue so much easier, m.
burning in effigy chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
the last two stanzas made me smile a little.. especially the last line

interesting perspective; it does seem that people are blowing many things out of proportion :-/
WyrdWolf chapter 1 . 1/19/2008
That is glorious! So in withthe times and so true; politics never change, just the issues do. Well said, very well said. Perfect format and tone for this subject.

Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 1/15/2008
Satirical, and funny look at how things get so farflung when it comes to political rhetoric. Sadly, for the most part this could be true. Well written and humorous. Good work. MD:77.