Reviews for Reborn
Alexandrea Romanzesco chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
i gotta agree that this moved a little too quick for me. slow it down and i think this will be a fascinating story.

alex
Lanayaj chapter 1 . 1/15/2008
OK, so I think this went way too fast. Have you ever written your own fiction before, or is this your first piece? Because, for one, the headstrong, beautiful princess is always in stories now. And though it's going along the same lines, you went way too fast into the whole thing. It's still good, I just think we need way more detail before any big stuff like that.

Lana