Wow, I can't believe I'm making a leprechaun go at it tonight with this...

xD I REALLY liked it, more so because I actually thought he'd die, but plot twist! Dom is alive!

I like the way it's written, and the way you captured fidelity and regret and all those emotions people forget with alcohol and life... It really reflects reality, of any similar situation, and yet is so unreal at once, because many would've fallen for stuff like this (Also because old ladies like Mary are scarce xD)

Samson's a lovely cat, and I just plain like the story! It's really cute :3

In any case, keep at it! Never quit! Even though this was probably written AGES before this comment... xD

Signed,
This randomly late dude :3

Regina Spektor!

And good story, y'know.

Awww, 3 it, so sweeet :)

btw, loved the Regina spektor reference hehe :P

so so so so sososo absolutely heartwarming! great job!

Huge age gaps ftw. I could read your writing all day, man. I was thinking woah, 4,0 words. Do I really want to read it? No, because it wasn't long enough xD

Good to know a leprechaun is getting some ass because of me :3

Some leprechaun somewhere appreciates this review. xD

Great story, made me feel all tingly inside. Or is it supposed to be warm? Idk it was great. xD

Oh, that was fabulous.

Erm...well, I find the leprecon comment sort of odd, but I liked the story! Very cute, very good. Yay!

I.. Uh, don't know how I feel about leprecons getting laid, but did enjoy how the story was written. I mean, it's not an unfamiliar idea, but the way it's presented is really nice.

There goes another happy leprechaun.

Very well written. I love charater flaws, they make me feel better about my crappiness.

I also love happy endings ( Write on! Right on!)

Another fantastic story!

I do enjoy your writing!

A real something that makes you realize.

Great job.

You are a genius.

I've read a few of your other stories, too, and I'm in love!

You're absolutely brilliant!

I'm engulfed!

you spelled, ah, 'leprecon' wrong. (i hope he's getting laid through the arse. that'd make an interesting story.)

much love to Dom.

Aww, this is so sad! But sweet at the same time because of the ending. I was so scared Dominic was going to die 'cos if he did I'd be like OMFG NO! D:

"I thought I was going to die, so I said all of this to a goddamn picture of you." He looks up at the ceiling, avoiding Maverick's eyes. "But it didn't mean shit, because the last thing I really said to you was 'Out.' One stupid, fuck-off word and I couldn't change that by talking to your picture."

It's so Dominic but so awesome like that it's awesome! It's my favorite bit of the fic.

And:

And Maverick lays there, crying, with a limp hand over his rigid one. Waiting for Dominic to wake up, like he should’ve waited for him to come home, or tried harder, or talked about it, or told him that hey, I miss you. I fucking miss you, so just stay home. Instead Maverick had gone out to a bar, kissed some jackass while the light of his world got torn up by a transport truck. He'd stared at Josh's chest while they pulled Dominic into the ambulance, flirted with Mr. Whoever while the doctors sedated him, and asked for a name while the phone's rings echoed uselessly on walls of an empty house.

Dude, you captured the tone of it perfectly! He's so angry at himself and he's probably blaming himself too. I can really imagine that scene (nearly typed seen o.o).

I heart it :D

-MD