|Reviews for elastic rebound theory|
| shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 2/13/2008
ha, I wonder what mr. d. would think of this analogy? nice job.
| katt's got your tongue chapter 1 . 1/18/2008
i love the parallel. last stanza is gorgeousness.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/15/2008
the rock heart comparison is really interesting and beautifully written.. especially the ending... awesome piece
| Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
very good. I liked the whole metaphor and everything. Keep it up!
| Autumn Lace chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
Cool. Very good.
| creepy kiss on tuesday chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
i think you mean "than" instead of "that", but this was lovely ]] i hope those hearts do turn to a beautiful color of dust. ]
| callista hogan chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
Wow. This was amazing, considering how much I can relate to it. Recently, I've been going through a tough time in my life, and sometimes, hearts are like pliant rocks, but... sometimes, they don't snap into shape. Amazing job. I can relate to this incrediby well.
| Militant Poet chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
ahh a very fun poem, i like it