Reviews for 731
Garuda01 chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
Nice poem, I'm a mixture of different Asian ethnicities , prominently Malay but with some Japanese blood, so this poem feels like a slap to the face, and about time too, it is time for the government of Japan to admit and write this into their history books, so the future generation learns from our horrors.

No sarcasm, I really feel Japan government should let their children know this.
TorgoTheWhite chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
I've personally seen grisly footages of the experimentation conducted by Unit 731. As a result this poem really resonated with me.
Cam S chapter 1 . 1/18/2008
Interesting subject matter, but I noticed some problematic areas, such as "walls do not constraint their evil".

The meter seems a little off, too...not quite sure how to fix that, though.
Maline Elensar chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
well written

i agree we shouldnt forget the horrors of the past otherwise they will happen again
dreamshell chapter 1 . 1/15/2008
*Jave Harron* wrote a *poem*? Well, after all, the source material is comparable to your own "unique" style. D

Nice touch with the letters that add up to spell "Shiro Ishii". As well as the "log" reference (Maruta).

Two typos I'll point out;

"When the three alls fail...". "Alls" should be "all".

"In addition, biological and chemical weapons were testing in the surrounding countryside." "Testing" should be "tested".

And what, no mention of switched limbs? Aw...

Returning some videotapes,

Love, dreamshell