Reviews for Sudden urges
threm chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
No offense.

This could be better but since you are in your hate-the-world mode, i don't expect a happy poetry.

try rhyming, that was my first problem when writing a poetry.

:)

-threm.
Rynx-too-genki chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
Its a very interesting way of writing a poem. I don't really get a hating the world vibe though. Maybe that's just me.
Aeonian Code chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
wow. . .kinda cool
SilverTwilight chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
Dun dun duh...so wonderfully bitter. The last lines made it just perfect, "The Angel of Death". Good job.

Dx