|Reviews for Sudden urges|
| threm chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
This could be better but since you are in your hate-the-world mode, i don't expect a happy poetry.
try rhyming, that was my first problem when writing a poetry.
| Rynx-too-genki chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
Its a very interesting way of writing a poem. I don't really get a hating the world vibe though. Maybe that's just me.
| Kexy Knave chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
wow. . .kinda cool
| SilverTwilight chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
Dun dun duh...so wonderfully bitter. The last lines made it just perfect, "The Angel of Death". Good job.