|Reviews for RaggedyAnn|
| Written chapter 1 . 1/30/2008
whoa! creepy. there's not much else I can say. you did a great job creating atmosphere at the beginning in the bus as well, and it somehow seems like patty IS a ragdoll, getting her neck snapped like that.
I keep thinking he murdered her even though there's nothing in the story about that really, but I love how he lied to the cops and he has her name and number but doesn't give it. nicely done.