Reviews for which dust?
The Masta Writa chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
I really, really like this one.

You present something beautiful, and then you give it a twist.

It's interesting.
Basara chapter 1 . 1/26/2008
a shatter... how we live a life...

Dreaming Chica chapter 1 . 1/19/2008
Beautiful and capturing, you have a way with words!

Dreaming Chica
Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 1/18/2008
Interesting and spiritual...I like the images that my mind conjures while reading this. A human mind. Very weel written haiku.

Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 1/18/2008
Interesting, and representative of the human condition. MD:77.
lymli chapter 1 . 1/18/2008
everybody needs a nice place to think... its a good poem with nice imagery.