|Reviews for which dust?|
| The Masta Writa chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
I really, really like this one.
You present something beautiful, and then you give it a twist.
| Basara chapter 1 . 1/26/2008
a shatter... how we live a life...
| Dreaming Chica chapter 1 . 1/19/2008
Beautiful and capturing, you have a way with words!
| Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 1/18/2008
Interesting and spiritual...I like the images that my mind conjures while reading this. A human mind. Very weel written haiku.
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 1/18/2008
Interesting, and representative of the human condition. MD:77.
| lymli chapter 1 . 1/18/2008
everybody needs a nice place to think... its a good poem with nice imagery.