Reviews for candy is bad for little kids
shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 2/13/2008
Yet again another good analogy, you're really on a roll lately. I feel bad for what happened to you but at the same time it only makes you wiser and stronger you know?
Yellow Duvet chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
oh, really neat and i found this somewhat mysterious. nice job, keep writing! :D
creepy kiss on tuesday chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
Not gonna say I don't feel the exact same way, even 7 months after love. I guess there is no "after" when you're talking about love. I like the metaphor, it fits well.
Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 1/17/2008
wow. I really loved this piece. I'm fav-ing it. Great job.

Faith
Autumn Lace chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
Good work. I like the title a lot.

-Flare
happens-all-the-time chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
but the aftertaste is what will never go away.

(and after(maths)tastes are never lovely.)

i seriously loved that! that was my favorite line

good work!]
half-sketched.staccatos chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
konnichi wa

"But the only memory in the end that you have of the chocolate is your brown-colored fingers and your new cavity" - ah, such a heartbreaking statement!

"after(maths)tastes"

Both were two favorites of mine. :D I love your poetry - as usual. *wistful sigh* You're amazing.

Zaijen

-Shan-