|Reviews for White Stag|
| Stop Staring At Me chapter 1 . 3/22/2016
I reviewed this story five years ago and I've re-read it many times since. It's just as good as it was the first time I read it, thanks!
| Oliver chapter 18 . 3/15/2016
I know it's been a while since you posted this and I don't even know if you're still active on this site anymore but I figured I'd say this anyway. I loved this story so much and I also really liked the colour mage thing. I read this story instead of studying and I definitely do not regret it. I might regret it when I actually have to take the test but oh well it's worth it. This was v good and I love Oren so much I'm going to cry. You said in the final chapter that you'll always like reviews even if it's been six years and I'm sorry I'm a bit late for that. Again I have no idea if you'll ever even read this but hey why not give it a shot
| Beautiful Feather chapter 2 . 2/3/2016
Oh my goodness. I had thought I'd lost you. This story has always stuck with me and I have gone looking for it before with no luck. I am so glad I found it so many years later. I will enjoy rereading this.
| Drepanididae chapter 12 . 11/28/2015
Hmm I know this is late but in response to the question I would chose yellow to make something disappear simply because being able to see something is based on a reflection of light. Hypothetically if someone could bend light which was reflecting off of them away from an observer's eyes, the object would technically would become invisible. You could try mixing in some blue because that color is air manipulation and you could change the bending of light that way. Or even to avoid messing with light entirely or just use orange to make an illusion to hide behind.
| Ishotthealbatross chapter 18 . 11/22/2015
Aww man :( Can't believe it's over. This story was epically fantastic. I wish it never ended haha :D
| Ishotthealbatross chapter 17 . 11/22/2015
I love youuuu for writing this cause its awesome-sauce.
| Ishotthealbatross chapter 16 . 11/22/2015
Ha! Take that, you hat-wearing witch! Oren is so cute and giggly :P
| Ishotthealbatross chapter 15 . 11/22/2015
This is so cool! Love how Oren kissed Joshua at the end and Allen's comment :P
| Ishotthealbatross chapter 14 . 11/22/2015
Does she hide a colour under the hat or what? lol
| Ishotthealbatross chapter 13 . 11/22/2015
Love this story more and more with every chapter :)
| Ishotthealbatross chapter 12 . 11/22/2015
You are absolutely wonderful :)
| Ishotthealbatross chapter 11 . 11/22/2015
I love everything about this story :)
| Ishotthealbatross chapter 10 . 11/22/2015
Joshua is taller and Oren is older!
| Guest chapter 8 . 11/22/2015
I love Oren! Always have, always will.
| Ishotthealbatross chapter 7 . 11/22/2015
So he lost his memory? Damn it! Poor Oren :( Again, he'll be deserted. Wait, his brother knows about Oren! Maybe he can remind Joshua?