This is really good. Oh and I reviewed Black Fox under the name tragedy in the making. But it was me. I loved this. Oren is awesome. lol. I want to be in his fan club, Ha!

I just finished reading White Stag and I loved every chapter of it. But maybe a spin-off is a good idea? I think the princess needs a suitor now and, while Joshua is taken, there is an available prince about ..? :p

Le Gasp! i loved it. so amazing .so cute. so Oren.

haha this was good!

oh my god oh my god oh my god. That was just too cute.

I really like the story itself, the writing style, and the creativity. Colorful magical balls in huge hats? Who would've thought? ;D

I loved reading this story soo much! I always love slash fantasy, it's so much fun... Anyway... This served to be a great way to procrastinate from doing my homework and writing my own story... Ebil dutchess! MWahahhaha... Darn. It's finished though! *sniffle* May I recommend a sequel? I love these characters and you did such an amazing job with them *babbles* Anyway, great job and I'll go do the stuff I should have been doing, but wasn't doing.

L0v3,

P0!s0n

you said the dutchess wears a bit hat...and you also said that the rainbow the mage would use would be...huge...and Allen's guess is she's hiding it. Star guesses it's under that hat.

Now I am tempted to shout "update" at you

But I suppose I will settle for "aww that was soo cute"

I really did enjoy it, it was adorible and lots of fun to read ;)

LOVE

seems good so far.

Aw, this was a very cute story. I would have liked some more explanation of how magic worked, because I found that that be the most original and interesting part, but for the most part the flow was good and the plot interesting.

And I assure you I'm old enough to read it. _~

Omg, that was an awesome story! The ending twas cute. D (I skipped the smutty part, though, since I'm not quite... into that stuff. But I'm sure it was well-written and detailed just like the rest of the story. xD)

I hope you write more of these fairytale twist things when you get back! )

I was a little surprised that the King was okay with them being together. I really loved the fact that they all made fun of the licking :) Some stuff are left unresoved. I hope Allen isn't in love with the princess. Meybe he should get together with the mage comming to investigate or maybe the white stag is actually some kind of sexy and weird mage/shapeshifter and Allec tries to hunt him and they get together. :P

Aww! It's over! What a sweet ending! I wonder if either of them ever see the stag again.

Thank you for finishing the story! It was a great read!

Good luck with RL!

NO!

Its over!

You will write another one right?right?

Maybe a sequel?

aww he better marry joshua!

Creepy stalker. Anyhow, you know no one's going to listen to that warning about the smut anyways, ja? Happy endings, yay...