Jeez he's so concerned with that hat and that evil woman why doesn't he just do some research

I don't know why, but everything to do with Oren's braids made me stop in this chapter-as if it was something important. Hmm. Methinks I am is too fixated on the hair! (Well, it's nice hair, isn't it?)

Now on to hats. Are you going to pull a swifty and make it instead in her petticoat? (*g*)

Love the story!

There is somthing i don't get though...How is Allen so calm with his brother being,well(hope i dont get any shit for this)Gay..

Is there a taboo or is it like the Greeks?

Only thing that confused me...

Keep writing

I woleheartedly agree with Allen. The lady with the weird hats is up to something weird. Isn't she the person that Oren saw in his vision dream thing? THis was a good chapter cant wait for the next one. :)

I wonder if the Duchess is hiding her Rainbow color underneath her large hat. Surprise surprise. Someone should check under there. Poor boys.

I just had a thought while reading this chapter that the duchess' magic is hidden in her hats. Humm that would work!

I loved the chapter~! It almost looks like Joshua is fighting the spell! GO GO GO! :D

Damn that princess and her mother, gr get rid of them! I hate them I wish this thing get's solved soon

Oh, that was just lovely... AND cruel! Having them so close together and yet so far apart. *Sigh* Wonderfully done, Qui! Gorgeous tension.

Hhm. Could Joshua fall in love with him again...? Even while under this other spell? This other spell seems to be waning though, or maybe it's not that strong and pervasive because it's not real love and, therefore, it doesn't operate in the same way. (Can my lengthy review make up for the fact that I haven't answered your questions at the end? No...? Well, what if I again say how much I love this story?)

What a divine and noble personage you are. I pale in comparison to your esquisite qualities. (translation: too lazy to figure out the colors, so I'm just telling you how wonderful you are.)

It was evil of you to cut it there! Poor Allen he lost his older brother figure! *squishes him*

I'm just getting my strength back from an illness so I'll tell you you're incredibly wonderful instead!

Another great chapter.

Hum, to make something disappear? I would use Yellow for light and Blue for water and make the light refract around it. Yay for science! I mean magic! XD

You are very wonderful.

...I kinda skimmed the Colors section.

Yellow and Red? Yellow and Blue if you were to create the illusion of something disappearing, as Blue deals with things unseen and Yellow deals with light and the senses, to dull or distort what a person can sense and thus see or feel or hear, etc. Maybe even just Yellow. I would say Yellow and Red to actually make something disappear. I mean, if Orange aids in creating things with magic, doesn't it stand to reason that the opposite might be true, that it could help un-create something?

Heh, I've been reading your stories for a while now, yet I've realized that I haven't submitted one review! o.0

Well, first off, I love this story, along with plenty of others that you've written. But this one is really cute, and I like the whole colors idea.

Secondly, I guess to make something disappear, the most obvious choices to me would be Yellow and Blue. Yellow light, time, and the senses, while Blue Air, things unseen. And to make something disappear, you could bend light or block the senses. xD -shrug- That's just what I would think. ) Unless by disappear, you mean "send to a different universe" or something that would make the item physically go away, so that you can't poke it or anything. Then I might want to add Red into the mix. -nodnod-

Oh, and even though I've done your "homework" and pretended to be a Color Mage, I still want to say that you're wonderful, and I hope you'll keep up the awesome work! xD (Do I get a diploma in the art of Color Mageness? Or at least a cookie? 3)

"It's in her mother's big hat, you idiots! In the HAT!" she screams loudly, eyes wide. And then suddenly stops when she realises everyone has gone quiet and is looking at her strangely.

"Sorry about that..." Toes the floor with her shoe. "Just a, err, have a theory I'm w-working on..." she mumbles.

(*Grins*)

I'd offer you some colour suggestions for that question but I've already forgotten all the wonderful colour theory you've shared with us throughout this story. Oh, all right. How about red? Yes; just because I like it. :D

I hate that there's no kissy-kissy muah-muah action right now.

Seriously.

Could you just do away with the whole pot and get back to that...?

Heh heh. Just kidding! This is great. I love it! (Although a bit of Oren/Joshua gorgeousness sometime soon wouldn't go astray, either!)