Reviews for White Stag
Rubadub chapter 7 . 2/4/2008

Why would he do that!


I suppose it was destined to happen though...


I can't even think of anything to say, I'm just so dissapointed in Joshua for being such an airhead.

Lerene chapter 7 . 2/4/2008
oh no, he kissed his mother. Something bad is going to happen now. I'm highly curious what that bad thing is going to be.
Prince Of Cats chapter 7 . 2/3/2008
Geez, this is so weird, actually reading a story that is updating, not a finished one...but in a totally awesome way.

My theory? Joshua just lost his memory at the sight of the Hat of Doom.
portabellaprincess chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
Interesting plot.
Renae K chapter 7 . 2/3/2008
Joshua is too cute! “Aww, you got me a dusty box, you shouldn’t have,” Joshua said, nipping behind Oren’s ear. And all that kissing when they were trying to say goodbye!

But he is also a damn FOOL! How could he forget that he wasn't supposed to kiss him mum! It wasn't like Oren didn't remind him! Constantly! Argh! Argh!

Right. I'm over it now. Phew.

Oh, and I've no theory by the way. :)
x-princessa-temnoti-x chapter 7 . 2/3/2008
NO! I didn't think he'd do it THAT easily! I'd thought maybe his mother was going to be all like, "Kiss me hello," but she didn't even... Is Oren going to die? Be in excruciating pain? Wither and waste away? Joshua...!

Tvorceskiy chapter 7 . 2/3/2008
Nu! Did he forget about Oren? Stupid Joshua! I'll kick is ass .
x-princessa-temnoti-x chapter 6 . 2/1/2008
...Update soon. Like, really soon. I mean, I know you just updated YESTERDAY but I don't care. Update. Um. Yeah.
Renae K chapter 6 . 1/31/2008
How about:

"[slash] A prince hunts, gets injured. A mage finds him and heals him. They fall in love. And that's where things get complicated."

Yes, it sounds 'suspiciously' like the one you already have.

What can I say...? Summaries are not exactly my strong point. :D

Another great chapter!
Rubadub chapter 6 . 1/31/2008
I shall enter my summary in the silly section...

Teh summary, oh noes :0

Joshua: Omigosh, hunt! -runs after pretty white thing-

White Stag: -deadpans- You suck at this game.

Joshua: No wai! -falls on his bum and gets carried off by a mage-

Oren: Wtf I've helped a prince. A SEXY prince -thinks dirty thoughts-

Joshua: -wakes up- Pretty mage *O*

Oren: -lawls inside his head-

-lots of shirtlessness, rainbows and sexy times later-

Joshua: I love you!

Oren: ._. No you don't.

Joshua: Yes I do!

Oren: No you don't!

Joshua: Yes I do!

Oren: No you don't!

Joshua: Yes. I. Do. AND YOU CAN'T STOP ME! -evil laugh-

Oren: Oh god... He's right. I can't. I'm stuck with him!

-awkward silence-

Joshua: So... sexy time?

Oren: -sigh- Indeed.

-sexy time ensues-

Fin :0
Renae K chapter 5 . 1/31/2008
Something tells me that Joshua should definitely heed Oren's warning and NOT kiss his mum (yet, something is also telling me that, damn it, Joshua probably will! Because... avoiding mum kisses are hard for most of us!).

Oh and this line made me cackle in a very undignified manner because, yes, I am six:

“I’m going to sit on the bed and play with my balls,” Oren deadpanned. (hahahaha!)

Renae K chapter 4 . 1/31/2008
This story has a lovely pace. I like that their relationship didn't go from Go to Whoa straight away. :)
Renae K chapter 3 . 1/31/2008
Intriguing mage colour theory.

This story is definitely working for me so far.:)
Renae K chapter 2 . 1/31/2008
Hm. It's getting even /more/ interesting. I'm keen to learn more about Oren (and to see if his predictions about the prince are true!).

Love your style, by the way. :)

To chapter 3!
Renae K chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
I'm liking this so far. :)

Off to chappy-chapter 3...
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