|Reviews for White Stag|
| Tekia chapter 11 . 2/15/2008
Another great chapter. I'm really glad that Allen sided with Oren. I wasn't looking forward for Oren having that fight on his hands, although it would have been quite a read. ;O
Something random: I love Oren's braids. He's three, right? Or am I wrong and he has four?
| x-princessa-temnoti-x chapter 11 . 2/15/2008
Ugh. I have to say I’m getting a bit exasperated with Jonathan. Not because of his not loving Oren, but I get the impression he was nicer to his brother prior to all this…
| Filly and Phips chapter 11 . 2/15/2008
Joshua's being stupid and whoever did that spell sucks!
(i think it was the duchess)
| A Tree chapter 11 . 2/15/2008
i like how love spells are muddy colored :3
and i hate that poor oren must endure this~! *sadness*
update soon, please :3
| Kariz chapter 10 . 2/15/2008
OMG thats the question that's been bugging me throughout the whole time I was reading this (but I was so into it I didn't stop to review XP sorry)
WHO'S TALLER? Sometimes I think its Joshua but then other times I wonder if it's Oren... but right now I THINK Joshua's taller :P
mm Oren's older? Simply cuz when I think of mages, they seem wiser and older/more mature compared to people who ARENT mages. But that's just stereotyping it so yeah.
CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE XD
| Tekia chapter 10 . 2/14/2008
Hello. I just found your story today and must say it has got me captivated. I am adoring the plot.
Lets see, I think that Joshua is taller and Oren is older. I see Oren as really short, like, just over five feet, and Joshua somewhere around seventeen or so.
| ai-08 chapter 10 . 2/13/2008
so i'm just going to take a guess and say... Joshua's taller, but Oren's older. but who knows? :P
i flippin love those two. and allen. but aww! poor oren. ;_; *lip wibble*
i hope all turns out well for them -
and btw- i love you're ideas about magic. very original :D
| jess chapter 10 . 2/12/2008
| x-princessa-temnoti-x chapter 10 . 2/12/2008
Hm. I would think Oren is older, but for some reason I get the impression that Joshua is taller. How did you have them, in your mind? I keep thinking I want Oren to be taller, but...I just see him as shorter, for some reason...
And whoo! It's not too strong a spell! And I like Allen. Sorry, PRINCE Allen. And :smacks Oren on the head for cheating: That wasn't fair to the prince, psh.
| Ambriel chapter 10 . 2/12/2008
Aww! I love your story! It's so cute! I can't wait to read more!
I can't believe Joshua kissed his mother! Bad! Fortunately for him his pretty mage will fix everything, right?
As for your question:
1) Who is taller?
I can't really decide who would be taller. I kind of picture them around the same height, I think. If I had to pick one I'd say Joshua.
2) Who is older?
I get the feeling Oren is older since he seems to be running away from too many things to be very young. Sometimes Joshua gives off the mature older brother vibe though so I'm not sure! D:
| Renae K chapter 9 . 2/11/2008
Ops! Almost missed an update. Aww. Oren had to part with his coloured blades for a while! (Though I imagine he still looks like a bit of a dream without them). And the poor thing has to work at the palace to sort out this mystery! Poor Oren. Isn't it bad enough that he has an idiot (albeit a 'lovable' idiot) for a lover?
I'd ask you the 'whodunnit' question but I don't really want to know. I'd rather find out the natural way!
Eagerly awaiting more...
| Jess chapter 9 . 2/10/2008
it was okay
| Rubadub chapter 9 . 2/10/2008
What I can't figure out is how something as simple as kissing his mother's cheek could seemingly give him amnesia. I know there MUST be some reason that he should have refrained but it continues to elude me.
-scratches head in frustration-
Oh! I would like to know if any of the characters like to read steamy romance novels :0!
| x-princessa-temnoti-x chapter 9 . 2/9/2008
Okay, what IS Joshua's grandfather's favorite dog's favorite chew toy?
Maybe I should show some self-restraint and not read this story for several 3-day gaps...just so I can come back and read more at once...
There's a spell thing on the castle and such that has to do with Joshua kissing his mother? (rhetorical question...ish)
| Filly and Phips chapter 8 . 2/8/2008
Joshua don't be stupid Oren loves you more than the princess whore!
I like joshua's charector, even if he can be a total idiot at times.
But Oren's my favorite.
Please keep writing!