Oh no, it does make sense, don't worry. In fact, it makes a lot of sense. It's so cool! You invented your whole own magic and i'm so jealous! Gyark i hate you! *throws string cheese at you*

My favourite bit? Joshua pathetic little: 'You make me cold' YEAH RIGHT! HORMONES BOY, HORMONES!COLD HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH IT!

Oh, and that adorable: 'Pretty mage.' TROP KAWAI! *glomps Joshua*

JOSHUA IS LO-OVE, JOSHUA IS IN LO-OVE!

JOSHUA AND OREN SITTING IN A TREE G-R-O-P-I-N-G-E-A-C-H-O-T-H-E-R YES PLEASE! o

I LOVE THIS STORY, CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE YAAYE GIVE US MORE JoshuaxOren GOODNESS BECAUSE ME LURVES IT!

*licks you*

There, you've been infected by my pervertisitus extremus. XD

Can't wait for an update.

Hugs, kisses and lovebites from

the one and only

Freak of Spade

Hi Qui! Never thought to see another of your story so soon...

I'm confused as to what color had what uses...

I like how you spun the story though...

and since I know you update fast... I'll just sit tight and enjoy the ride...

My favorite part was definitely Oren's shirtlessness :0

And I'm STILL in love with the color/rainbow magic system you have devised. Oren's explanation of the history behind magic eating and rainbow and split color orbs was pretty cool too. I'm curious as to hearing more about the Mage Wars. They sound intense.

So yeah, this chapter was all around super.

-Nub

I actually really liked your magic set up it interestiing and unique. Wonderful story hope you can write more soon!

Orb that sucks the piss out of you, that made me laugh.

I'm not confused about the magic system at all. In fact I found it pretty interesting.

I like this story. Not much has happened, but it still has my interest. Can't wait to read more.

I likey

please update

go 'round, 'round, 'round! spin faster! bring updates sooner!

This is a very intriguing first chapter!

What could happen to prince Joshie and mage Oren, hmm?

So many possible outcomes, but only yours is the one that counts.

It certainly makes me want to read more ;D

Please keep at it!

Oh god, know I must know more! I do hope you continue this, it's gotten off to a very good start.

showing love! showing love! love love love!

interesting begining, wish there was more chapters already up though

You say that to review is to show love... so show you love I shall :)

I like the parallel between the father and the son both seeing and missing their shots at the white stag. I'm also liking the color thing regarding the Mage's power. It's something I haven't seen used quite this way in any fantasy books before so I'm pretty impressed. I'm really interested in finding out how Oren's mage powers work. That's always the beauty in a fantasy story, I think. The imaginative details behind things.

Take it easy,

-Nub

Oren.. Oren... Why is that name so familiar?

Was he in the Dancing story?