Reviews for White Stag |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Joshua is taller and Oren is older! |
![]() ![]() I love Oren! Always have, always will. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So he lost his memory? Damn it! Poor Oren :( Again, he'll be deserted. Wait, his brother knows about Oren! Maybe he can remind Joshua? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heart-breaking :( Tell me who did this to Oren so I can kill him! lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is just crazy adorable. How do you write like this? How do you make me fall in love with your characters in four chapters? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm my fav. thing in this was the jacket bit. Joshua is being so cute and coy :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oren...oh poor sweet Oren :) Love him too much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love Oren already! Total sweetheart :) seems like a lovely story, can't wait to read more :) |
![]() ![]() Aww, sweet, thank you so much for posting this *sigh* I just love a sweet little fairy tale every once in a while. Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was good. That was reallllyyy good. |
![]() ![]() This is wonderful! It's only the beginning but I am looking forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such a well written story! I found next to no mistakes in your grammar or spelling, and the story line is just amazing! You elude to many things with out having to use tons of detail. I love when a writer lets the reader still have their own imagination. Wish there was more but still a great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really liked the story, especially the ending :D |
![]() ![]() Love. Lovelovelove gosh this just tided me through the worst of my exam stresses after 22 hours of being awake so I have nothing but love for you right now, Qui. THANK YOU 3 Please write more fantasy. I know this is a sucky review and more of mindless gushing but :( I love your story too much to nitpit at flaws I didn't bother noticing. |