|Reviews for White Stag|
| Fremdschaemen chapter 18 . 9/11/2012
It's not six years, but three is also a pretty long time. Great story. I loved your plot and characterisation, and that you did not make one of the males a whiny baby as is common in these stories.
| Lunar chapter 18 . 8/2/2012
Great story. :) I liked it a lot. And to make an example of how much I loved it, I should tell you that it is now 5:30 AM. :P
| Lunar chapter 17 . 8/2/2012
Hahahaha, lol. You say you want 100 reviews on this chap, so to review. But when I'm reading it, now, there's already 225! XD
| Lunar chapter 15 . 8/2/2012
I knew it! .
| Lunar chapter 13 . 8/2/2012
Wait... Um... That last review was for this chapter... Lol! XD
| Lunar chapter 12 . 8/2/2012
I'm horrible at decision making... Seriously, it takes me about a week to even consider which classes to take for the next year. And even then I still have to beg my best friend to help me... :P And then I usually change my mind at the last minute... About four or so times... This year I couldn't even force myself to turn the stupid paper in! I have no clue what classes they decided to put me in! And still won't for a couple of weeks! I swear, that stupid scheduling paper is worse than the freaking OGTs to me!
But enough about me, great chap! :D
| Lunar chapter 12 . 8/2/2012
Yellow and Blue! Definitely!
| Lunar chapter 8 . 8/1/2012
Oren, cause I like his personality. :)
And I'm sorry. Cause I mentally called Joshua a douche. ;) Though I'm sure I'll figure out why what happened... happened. And yes, I am very, extremely, confused.
| Lunar chapter 7 . 8/1/2012
I think his mother's sick or something, maybe he contracts a disease or something from her. Or perhaps it's in some odd way connected to the quiet hat lady...?
| Lunar chapter 4 . 8/1/2012
Oh, lovely groping. I love it when characters grope each other. You know why? Because I don't like it much when two(or possibly more) characters get together and jump each other right off the bat. Groping is a good middle ground. Plus, lol, I think that it's sexy and romantic! You know, because they can grope each other without one of both of them getting offended or slapped, lol.
| Lunar chapter 2 . 8/1/2012
"Shades of red," Lana said, hand to her breast. "Is that where he is? I've heard the whole castle is spinning with worry over him."
I don't exactly know why, but that line made me giggle. I think that it might be because "Shades of red," sounds like a curse, but it's not one I've ever heard, and I really liked it. Actually, I've never heard of this 'color' business at all, but I do find myself enjoying it more and more with every new line that has mention of it!
| RaeAnnLove chapter 18 . 6/27/2012
This was a great and sweet read thank you got allowing me the privilege to read it. I also adore your color Mage system! It was wonderful and outstanding! I adore it and it's creativity!
| YamiTenshiKoi chapter 18 . 5/21/2012
Oh my god. I'm not sure how I finished this entire huge story in one day, except that I just couldn't stop. That was so beautiful. I found myself dying with laughter at some points and about to cry at others. I really enjoyed the whole storyline and the characters were very real. I wasn't actually going to review because it's clearly been done for a while... But you said even 6 years later you'd still want reviews for it. So I hope you appreciate me having to type this out on my phone's tiny keyboard. Once again, lovely story, dear! 3
| ImmanenceEnsured chapter 4 . 4/24/2012
My favourite thing about Joshua is that he's cute but not too cute, and that he dares to say what he wants. Although a little shyness wouldn't have hurt, but oh well...
| ImmanenceEnsured chapter 3 . 4/24/2012
I really like the colour majic system and the short history Oren gave, it was cute and easy to understand. With the colours you can visualize everything so that, instead of abstract - and uncool - vocal spells, the majic takes on a form. Oren and Joshua's characters have a nice flow so far, even if I'd have been a little more humble and polite towards a prince if he one day appeared on my doorstep:)