Reviews for White Stag
Jude Diamond chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
Loving the first chapter. You are a very good story teller. I think I love the detail of the "Colors" the most. It's cool how mages have magic orbs following them in your story. :)
Poppy Flower chapter 12 . 3/24/2013
Here's my guess: the ditches is hiding he rainbow orb in her ginormous hat and something is going to happen to Allen.
Poppy Flower chapter 9 . 3/24/2013
Really like the story so far. It would be nice if there was a page break between the Author's note and the actual story so I know when the chapter ends with less confusion.
July chapter 18 . 3/13/2013
You are amazing and magical and an exceptionally talented writer. Your stories are refreshing and beautiful thank you so much for writing them.
underlay chapter 18 . 3/1/2013
yay i loved this story! (and nearly six years. well, five. but hey, who's counting?... oh, me...)
oren has to be my favourite but the two of them together are just *unintelligible shmurgle of joy*. i ruhlly like allen as well, and even the duchess was kind of hilarious when i imagined her with this giant witchy hat bobbing about on top of her head (even if it took me a silly amount of time to figure out WHY she had the giant bobbing hat). i hope you still check your reviews etc., ace story stuff!
underlay chapter 13 . 3/1/2013
the haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaattttttt tttttttttttttttt
underlay chapter 10 . 3/1/2013
(i know this is finished but hey ho want to answer)
(plus im really enjoying by the way)
Joshua is taller
and Oren is older
opelleam chapter 18 . 1/30/2013
Nice story although the plot was a little too fast for me sometimes, but i enjoy my reading nonetheless.
Guest chapter 18 . 12/9/2012
Shit outta luck for an update, eh? How about a SEQUEL?
Guest chapter 18 . 11/7/2012
A lovely story! You know what grammar and spelling is! Sorry, weird thing to say but...anyway.
I like how it's not just a love story. There are other problems, and the characters really develop as the adventures continue. Yay, happy ever afters win, and I hope the Duchess is ok in the end, even if she doesn't have any more magic. New studies: what happens when rainbows get eaten? Fun for random mages in the guild
Klistremerker chapter 18 . 9/11/2012
It's not six years, but three is also a pretty long time. Great story. I loved your plot and characterisation, and that you did not make one of the males a whiny baby as is common in these stories.
Lunar chapter 18 . 8/2/2012
Great story. :) I liked it a lot. And to make an example of how much I loved it, I should tell you that it is now 5:30 AM. :P
Lunar chapter 17 . 8/2/2012
Hahahaha, lol. You say you want 100 reviews on this chap, so to review. But when I'm reading it, now, there's already 225! XD
Lunar chapter 15 . 8/2/2012
I knew it! .
Lunar chapter 13 . 8/2/2012
Wait... Um... That last review was for this chapter... Lol! XD
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