|Reviews for White Stag|
| ImmanenceEnsured chapter 3 . 4/24/2012
I really like the colour majic system and the short history Oren gave, it was cute and easy to understand. With the colours you can visualize everything so that, instead of abstract - and uncool - vocal spells, the majic takes on a form. Oren and Joshua's characters have a nice flow so far, even if I'd have been a little more humble and polite towards a prince if he one day appeared on my doorstep:)
| PyroTech chapter 18 . 2/13/2012
lovely ending 3
| PyroTech chapter 10 . 2/13/2012
Oren is older but Joshua is taller. Thats how I see it.
| PyroTech chapter 7 . 2/13/2012
NO! What did Joshua do! Must read on!
| NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 18 . 1/5/2012
yay! cute story. great job as always, qui.
| NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 17 . 1/5/2012
*tosses another review to you, since you bate so much in the chapters*
| NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 13 . 1/5/2012
man, i really thought allen had figured out she was hiding her rainbow in her hat beforehand. oh well.
| NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 10 . 1/5/2012
yay! i knew the little brother was going to help! yay!
| NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 3 . 1/5/2012
yes, explanations about magic are very clear. what a unique idea you have there.
my fave of this chapter: the easy conversational tone the two boys have, even if they barely know one another.
| NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
i'm not sure if i've read this before...but so far, it is rather interesting. my bet is that oren shapeshifts into the white stag, but i also hope i'm wrong.
| Ekanos chapter 18 . 11/25/2011
I just red this whole thing tonight! I have to admit I really like all the ideas and such behind the story!
Even though its been years since you wrote this I thought I'd leave a review anyway!
| Arya Yamamoto chapter 18 . 11/3/2011
Loved it. Very much. Heart-melting love, a delightful bit of angst, a good resolution (though i could see it coming a mile away), and a happily-ever-after... what can be more perfect than that?
| Jelluymint chapter 18 . 10/12/2011
A really good story, and a wonderful read. Hope you continue to give us more of your great stories and thank you very much.
| Cique chapter 14 . 10/1/2011
Her hat! I bet it's full of secrets! /shifty eyes
| Cique chapter 13 . 10/1/2011
I suspect that it is the queen who is the mage and not the duchess...