Reviews for White Stag
NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 18 . 1/5/2012
yay! cute story. great job as always, qui.
NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 17 . 1/5/2012
*tosses another review to you, since you bate so much in the chapters*
NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 13 . 1/5/2012
man, i really thought allen had figured out she was hiding her rainbow in her hat beforehand. oh well.
NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 10 . 1/5/2012
yay! i knew the little brother was going to help! yay!
NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 3 . 1/5/2012
yes, explanations about magic are very clear. what a unique idea you have there.

my fave of this chapter: the easy conversational tone the two boys have, even if they barely know one another.
NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
i'm not sure if i've read this before...but so far, it is rather interesting. my bet is that oren shapeshifts into the white stag, but i also hope i'm wrong.
Ekanos chapter 18 . 11/25/2011
I just red this whole thing tonight! I have to admit I really like all the ideas and such behind the story!

Even though its been years since you wrote this I thought I'd leave a review anyway!

Awesome story!
Arya Yamamoto chapter 18 . 11/3/2011
Loved it. Very much. Heart-melting love, a delightful bit of angst, a good resolution (though i could see it coming a mile away), and a happily-ever-after... what can be more perfect than that?
Jelluymint chapter 18 . 10/12/2011
A really good story, and a wonderful read. Hope you continue to give us more of your great stories and thank you very much.
Cique chapter 14 . 10/1/2011
Her hat! I bet it's full of secrets! /shifty eyes
Cique chapter 13 . 10/1/2011
I suspect that it is the queen who is the mage and not the duchess...
Cique chapter 3 . 10/1/2011
I'm so impressed. With your magic system, your characters, your ability to actually update in a fixed schedule (which I can never do hahaha)

Please know that I'm thoroughly enjoying this. Thank you for the very nice read! (I'm quite happy to note that this is complete) I'll let you know when I've finished reading the whole thing. Cheers!
0nyx-Rose chapter 3 . 8/31/2011
I love this chapter, the history and explanation of the Mage Wars and Colour magic was done really well and I really enjoyed reading about them.
lemon sketches chapter 18 . 8/19/2011
Yay! Great story, read it in one sitting! Thank you!
Superman's Girl chapter 18 . 7/21/2011
AAAHHHHH this was a WONDERFUL story! I love detailed your magic was. And I love Oren to pieces! :)
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